Front cover improvements

To start with the design below as the design of my front cover page. Although liking the image and the masthead, when asking for feedback on  my front cover page, people said that they did not like the large amount of pink writing on the left hand side of the page. Agreeing with them i was not to sure about the layout of my text and so rearranged my text around a little. I also thought about the amount of text I had used and realized that it may have been a little too much. My teacher also commented on the placing of the flasher. As some people can be immature, with the flasher being in this position of her body it may cause laughs from audiences and so I have therefore moved it slightly away from this area of the body.

After adjusting my text I came out with a magazine front cover which looks a little like the one below. This time although I likes the placing of text, I felt that some text was a little to large and needed re-sizing slightly. Also with feedback I was told that the writing on the right hand side of the page looked as though it was the main headline and the main story within the magazine. However this is not the case so when adjusting it again I had to make sure the main headline was bolder and brighter.

I had then changed the caption to go with my main image on my front cover page, so I edited the text slightly on the page. I also added some more text as the bottom of the page as it seemed slightly empty.This is my final front cover image